Blood Drive-Ind. Critiques

Positive Feedback

Evan- Voice Overs are well constructed
Nick- Shots are using rule of thirds
Allison- We can clearly hear voice overs and interviews
Courtney- Explains well during voice overs, and transitions well
Dema-Voice Overs have good tone
Me- Voice overs are well thought out
Kierstyn-Shots are steady
Rylee- Great voice overs and explanations
Catherine- Doesn't use same interview answers
Alex- Shots are well placed in rule of thirds
Mitch- Transitions well towards interviews
Nicole- 6 shots look well spread and centered
Drew- Voice overs are very well transitioned
Emily- Interviews are using rule of thirds
Conlin- Voice overs are well transitioned
Cyle- Voice overs are well transitioned
Jacob- Interviews are well placed
Delaney- N/A
Abbey- Interviews include "J and L edits"
Amy- Voice overs are explained and throughout well
Chelesea- Uses 5 senses to describe atmosphere in first voice over
Alyssa- Voice overs are well organized throughout

Constructive Feedback

Evan- Can't hear interviews, check audio
Nick- Can't hear voice overs, check audio
Allison- Interviews aren't using rule of thirds
Courtney- Shots are shaky, interview is looking down, needed to be at eye level
Dema- too much nat noise in between shots
Kierstyn- Voice overs need more explanation
Rylee- interviews aren't using rue of thirds
Catherine- Voice overs need more in depth answers
Alex- Voice overs aren't clear to audience
Mitch- Voice overs need more clear answers
Nicole- Voice overs need aren't clear
Drew- Interviews aren't using rule of thirds
Emily- shots need to be more steady
Conlin- interviews aren't using rule of thirds
Cyle- interviews aren't using rule of thirds
Jacob- Voice overs are too simple
Delaney- N/A
Abbey- Voice overs are too simple
Amy- Interviews aren't heard, check sound
Chelsea- Interviews need rule of thirds
Alyssa- too many introductions to different or other interviews

Reflection

Overall the class did a good job on interviews, and made sure they were using the rule of thirds. Something we could all work on including myself is making our voice overs sound more interesting, our make a well thought out introduction voice over to grab audiences attention.